tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post5893550199431677992..comments2023-08-16T03:41:06.575-04:00Comments on Seeking Authentic Voice: On A Lighter Note: another Mary Oliver poemTerrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-71969334472820761152007-08-08T17:02:00.000-04:002007-08-08T17:02:00.000-04:00diane, you must have your hands full...i understan...diane, you must have your hands full...i understand, although I must confess...even though I've read your blog lately, I didn't even think about a link... things being a bit chaotic here with vacation stuff.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-40239563739406965872007-08-08T13:22:00.000-04:002007-08-08T13:22:00.000-04:00I'm sorry I forgot to link to it this time. Thing...I'm sorry I forgot to link to it this time. Things just seem to be a little chaotic around here lately...<BR/><BR/>I promise to do better next time.Diane M. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749136181846671327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-72377923425419141662007-08-07T23:56:00.000-04:002007-08-07T23:56:00.000-04:00I like the poem, the picture and the thought. Than...I like the poem, the picture and the thought. Thank you so much for this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14654861033242845082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-33759762752355781822007-08-07T22:50:00.000-04:002007-08-07T22:50:00.000-04:00I actually think it would be hilarious!I actually think it would be hilarious!Diane M. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749136181846671327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-58794425674522001932007-08-07T20:29:00.000-04:002007-08-07T20:29:00.000-04:00Yes, diane, I think that's right. "by error" point...Yes, diane, I think that's right. "by error" points us to the rest of the poem and all the little "errors" it describes...I mean, have you ever seen a bird scratch its belly while flying? I've not, but my, how funny that would be!Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-71052792787321946222007-08-07T16:44:00.000-04:002007-08-07T16:44:00.000-04:00really insightful comments!(and, by the way, mompr...really insightful comments!<BR/><BR/>(and, by the way, mompriest, offspring #1 has her 'simpsonize' tricks posted in my comments section)Barbara B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02645311082295646375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-38412986113153024862007-08-07T15:47:00.000-04:002007-08-07T15:47:00.000-04:00I think the words "in error" are a little disjunct...I think the words "in error" are a little disjunction, mirroring what happens to the rhythm when the bird lands by mistake. rhythm is broken.<BR/><BR/>I had a cat once who liked to jump up on the toilet seat in the morning to watch me get ready for work. One day she jumped -- and the toilet seat was up. Ooops!<BR/><BR/>I think of things like this...<BR/><BR/>the poem is like a little joke...Diane M. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749136181846671327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-41482644596917801052007-08-07T11:40:00.000-04:002007-08-07T11:40:00.000-04:00I love the playful reminder of the very basic mess...I love the playful reminder of the very basic message of God's creating all things good, to love and enjoy each other, giving honor and glory to God. What more honors God than enjoying the simple gifts of life. Look and see, indeed.Rev SShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14661507940053055640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-7674261771175161112007-08-07T10:04:00.000-04:002007-08-07T10:04:00.000-04:00Yes. There is a playfulness in the way the words a...Yes. There is a playfulness in the way the words are arranged. I love that laughing is its own line.<BR/><BR/>then, there is a more serious tone to the "look and see" - I think because we so often go through the motions doing neither... <BR/><BR/>which then points us right back to why we should - when we look and see all kinds of things are going on!Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-36970425723602279212007-08-07T09:44:00.000-04:002007-08-07T09:44:00.000-04:00I agree, that there is a random feeling... line le...I agree, that there is a random feeling... line lengths don't have a particular rhythm, and "laughing" is on a line by itself.<BR/><BR/>maybe it's a way of saying, it's not so serious.<BR/><BR/>but the message, "look and see"... hmmm.Diane M. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749136181846671327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-25518017547348545812007-08-07T08:34:00.000-04:002007-08-07T08:34:00.000-04:00Also, I am intrigued by the random seeming rhythm ...Also, I am intrigued by the random seeming rhythm of this poem. No rhyming words, no repeating syllables to create a rhythm. It's more "random" and yet not. Oliver seems to break all the rules of poetry and make up new ones.<BR/><BR/>And I still have been unable to get her poetry handbook out of the library. Ciardi's was good, but I want to read hers too.<BR/><BR/>Any one have any other thoughts about this poem?Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-16263638986329953932007-08-07T08:29:00.000-04:002007-08-07T08:29:00.000-04:00I really love the organic humor in this poem...the...I really love the organic humor in this poem...the sparrow landing on an eider duck, and the duck it seems was laughing.<BR/><BR/>I see lots of ducks, never seen one laugh. But I've seen my dogs smile and laugh, I believe it's possible.<BR/><BR/>And the gull scratching its belly while flying...<BR/><BR/>Some days I need to see the humor, the joy, the fun in life.<BR/><BR/>And as this poem describes it, humor is a natural part of life.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667178624061122421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-3227043399783807152007-08-07T00:50:00.000-04:002007-08-07T00:50:00.000-04:00good poem--great imagery!good poem--great imagery!Barbara B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02645311082295646375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-48919947909861507212007-08-06T22:20:00.000-04:002007-08-06T22:20:00.000-04:00"..if we only look and see." What an invitation. T..."..if we only look and see." What an invitation. Thank you. And I would not have noticed the "error" with the photograph if you hadn't pointed it out--I only thought--what a lovely picture!Janhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08061517211101084120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-17852130487887604602007-08-06T21:50:00.000-04:002007-08-06T21:50:00.000-04:00I tend to find God in the little things around us,...I tend to find God in the little things around us, as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2678482213828648107.post-46025618140310030932007-08-06T21:48:00.000-04:002007-08-06T21:48:00.000-04:00you're right. It's a light poem, a celebration.I ...you're right. It's a light poem, a celebration.<BR/>I like it.Diane M. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07749136181846671327noreply@blogger.com